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Regardless of writers’ levels of experience or areas of expertise, many struggle with revision, a component of the writing process that encompasses everything from transformative changes in content and argumentation to minor corrections in grammar and punctuation. Perhaps because revision involves so many forms of modification, it is the focus of most scientific writing guides and handbooks. Revision can be daunting; how does one progress from initial drafts (called “rough drafts” for good reason) to a polished piece of scholarly writing?
Developing a process for revision can help writers produce thoughtful, polished texts and grow their written communication skills. Consider, then, a systematic approach to revision, including strategies to employ at every step of the process.
A System for Approaching Revision
Generally, revision should be approached in a top-down manner by addressing higher-order concerns (HOCs) before moving on to lower-order concerns (LOCs). In writing studies, the term “higher order” is used to denote major or global issues such as thesis, argumentation, and organization, whereas “lower order” is used to denote minor or local issues such as grammar and mechanics (McAndrew and Registad). The more analytical work of revising HOCs often has ramifications for the entire piece. Perhaps in refining the argument, a writer will realize that the discussion section does not fully consider the study’s implications. Or, a writer will try a new organizational scheme and find that a paragraph no longer fits and should be cut. Such revisions may have far-reaching implications for the text.
Dedicating time to tweaking wording or correcting grammatical errors is unproductive if the sentence will be changed or deleted. Focusing on HOCs before LOCs allows writers to revise more effectively and efficiently.
Revision Strategies
Bearing in mind the general system of revising from HOCs to LOCs, you can employ several revision strategies.
Begin by evaluating how your argument addresses your rhetorical situation—that is, the specific context surrounding your writing, including the audience, exigence, and constraints (Bitzer).
For example, you may write an article describing a new treatment. If the target journal’s audience comes from a variety of disciplines, you may need to include substantial background explanations, consider the implications for practitioners and scholars in multiple fields, and define technical terms. By contrast, if you are addressing a highly specialized audience, you may be able to dispense with many of the background explanations and definitions because of your shared knowledge base. You may consider the implications only for specialists, as they are your primary audience. Because this sort of revision affects the entire text, beginning by analyzing your rhetorical situation is effective.
Analyze your thesis or main argument for clarity.
Write a reverse outline to evaluate the global organization of your text. Unlike traditional outlines, which are written before drafting, reverse outlines reflect the content of written drafts.
Record the main idea of each paragraph in a separate document or in your text’s margins. Then, consider whether the order of your ideas is logical. This method will also help you identify ideas that are out of place or digressive. You may also evaluate organization by printing the text and cutting it up so that each paragraph appears on a separate piece of paper. You may then easily reorder the paragraphs to test different organizational schemes.
Completing a Post-Draft Outline
The reverse outline mentioned above is also known as a post-draft outline. This presentation provides guidance for completing one for an entire essay draft and for an individual problematic paragraph.
Watch this presentation online: Post-Draft Outline by Alexis McMillan-Clifton.
Works Cited
Bitzer, Lloyd. “The rhetorical situation.” Philos Rhetoric, 1968, pp. 1-14.
McAndrew, Don. Registad, Tom. Tutoring writing: a practical guide for conferences. Boynton/Cook, 2001.
LICENSE AND ATTRIBUTE
Adapted from Arthur Rankin’s “Module 5: Writing Process 80: Higher Order Concerns for Editing” of English Composition II, 2023, used according to CC by 4.0. Access for free at https://library.achievingthedream.org/odessaenglishcomp2/chapter/higher-order-concerns-for-editing/